WALT: do some good writing
in room 3 Mr Gray showed us a picture of a stair case
this is my writing.
There was a magical stair case with flowers and plants and rosy pink stairs, with cotton candy looking clouds as i walk up i hare the beautiful sound of the waves a butterfly on my head it was silver white. The sun shining making the ocean glisten. As i went up i past the foggy clouds it was mistrial...
whats your best writing?
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