WALT: do a advertisement of our calendar art.
this is my calendar art advertisement.
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Holly I really like your calendar because it is colourful and amazing. Please come and check our calendar out on the blog it is amazing to.
ReplyDeleteFrom Leah
Hello Holly,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about your calendar art. This looks really cool. I like the amount of colors you have put on it. How long did it take you to do this? Did you have fun making this? Maybe next time you could add a little more information into your blurb?
Kind Regards Trinity
Hi Holly,
ReplyDeleteThis blog post is really cool.The calendar art is really good i must have taken you a long time. Maybe next time make your blurb a bit bigger and put more information in it and write like how long it took you.
Chloe
Hi Holly,
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog post. The drawing is very good.
Next time you could maybe add a bigger blurb and puyt more information and detail in it.
Great Job!!
Micki