Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 21 April 2020
Flanders fields
my favourite part was making the DLO with my best friend
do you know the Flanders fields poem?
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Wow Holly, this looks great. I do know the poem Flanders Field its very good isn't it. Maybe next time you could make the writing a big bigger or a different color as it is a little difficult to read. How long did this take you and Emily to do?
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it took along time because me and Emily were talking on the phone Yes the Flanders Field poem is very good
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