WALT: write what we had to do for P.E
Have you ever jumped on a dive mat?
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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I like the colour choice of your slides Holly. I enjoyed stretching out to catch the ball on the dive mat. I think cricket would be cool to play on an inflatable field!
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Tama and I'm from Rawhiti School. I like the way you explain what you did in P.E. Maybe next time you could make more slides on your slideshow about what you did it P.E. Are you going to make more slideshows about what you did at P.E.
Kia ora Holly, I'm Greta from Rawhiti school
ReplyDeleteI like how you have a picture of you on the red mat. I also have done this before and I did not catch the ball the first but I got better. Next time remember to check for capital letters on your title.
Kia ora Holly I'm Alequa a student from Rawhiti School. I like the colour choice of your slides. I think you could use more exciting words. Next time you could put more photos in the slide. I really like your photo.
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ReplyDeleteI'm Elvis from Rawhiti school! I also did "Keep your eyes on the ball" at my school and it was really cool to do. When did you do this? Maybe you could add some punctuation next time becajuse it will make your blog easier to read? I enjoyed reading your blog post. WELL DONE!!!!! :D